Holy shit this sucked, and not just the plot the writing was horrible. It was stilted, jarring, and very juvenile. I ended up skimming to the end, not that I cared what happened, I just have been getting a lot of grief for reviewing unfinished books. Well I never should have bothered, nothing happened, and I mean nothing. So all in all a boring, badly written short story, its a very good thing that it was free.